Saturday, April 16, 2011

Identity Crisis!

I am hiding my identity
Till the time I stand again
Till the time I stand to gain
Till the time darkness remain
I am hiding my identity

I am still there, but not visible
May talk to you someday, but not in real
My link to everybody just got feeble
Coz i'm hiding my identity

I am waiting to create it,
Not running like a foolish rabbit,
And when it happens everybody will savor it,
But till that time i'm hiding my identity

You might be willing,
As things aint revealing,
My journey looks thrilling,
But until the destination is reached,
I'm hiding my identity

Don't count on me, and dont follow,
Dont enter into my darkness, it can swallow,
My soul lies there but still my body hollow,
And till the time I reach my strength,
I'm hiding my identity.

I'm working on it, making a grove,
I've come a long way, but still a point to prove,
Its not belle dancing, its a chess move,
And untill its check and mate,
I'm hiding my identity.

I'm hiding my identity, but face remains there,
I may look skeptical, but not a speck of fear,
If you can't locate me, try calling my number,
Yet you dont hear me,
Coz I'm hiding my identity...

6 comments:

  1. very nicely written!! I liked second last para the most..:)

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  2. wow... maza aa gaya.. feel like reading it again and again!!!
    Yup dis is how some people become successful overnight... they gain their identity one odd day... :) wow... best till now... keep going dude!!!

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  3. kya likh diya bhai.......
    its like i am hiding my emotions , but will tell you one day...
    its very tough to find the right one's but you don't worry ..and keep it hidden till the dawn of your soul....

    i know the overleaf mingling of words will mingle you permanently and put you into identity crisis till the time Dr. Robert Langdon will help you out ( revealing a personal thing) in De-symbolizing your identity...

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  4. the words do weave an exquisite doubt in the readers mind and he is indeed enticed to unveil and somehow know the poet's true identity! the choice of words could have been better though ..

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  5. I am still Der...hiding my identity.

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